Breakable Vow
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Overview
Annie McGowan is eighteen years old, smart, wisecracking, fun-loving . . . a typical teenager. Yet circumstances force Annie out of the security of high school and into a world of problems all her own. Faced with an unexpected pregnancy and a turbulent, violent relationship with her boyfriend, Kevin, Annie's life begins to spiral out of control. And though her worst fears about Kevin are realized, in the heat of the moment, she finds the courage to fight back.
First-time author and domestic violence expert Kathryn Ann Clarke brings clarity and compassion to an often hotly debated issue. In this inspiring debut novel, one remarkable young woman faces the most difficult odds and emerges on the other side — whole.
The Breakable Vow features a special educational Classroom Guide section in the back of the book that discusses: How to Recognize the Danger Signs of an Abusive Relationship, Safety Planning, Break-Up Planning, Cycle of Violence, Questions to Ask About the New Person in Your Life, and much more.
After eighteen-year-old Annie becomes unexpectedly pregnant, she marries her boyfriend, but slowly realizes that he is abusive and that she must decide what she can and will do about the relationship and to keep her daughter and herself safe. Includes information on the characteristics of abusive relationships and how to end them.
Synopsis
Annie McGowan is eighteen years old, smart, wisecracking, fun-loving . . . a typical teenager. Yet circumstances force Annie out of the security of high school and into a world of problems all her own. Faced with an unexpected pregnancy and a turbulent, violent relationship with her boyfriend, Kevin, Annie's life begins to spiral out of control. And though her worst fears about Kevin are realized, in the heat of the moment, she finds the courage to fight back.
First-time author and domestic violence expert Kathryn Ann Clarke brings clarity and compassion to an often hotly debated issue. In this inspiring debut novel, one remarkable young woman faces the most difficult odds and emerges on the other side whole.
The Breakable Vow features a special educational Classroom Guide section in the back of the book that discusses: How to Recognize the Danger Signs of an Abusive Relationship, Safety Planning, Break-Up Planning, Cycle of Violence, Questions to Ask About the New Person in Your Life, and much more.
Publishers Weekly
In newcomer Clarke's instructional problem novel about an abusive relationship, Annie gets pregnant by her possessive high school sweetheart, gives birth to their daughter, then marries him. She moves with Kevin from Chicago to Texas, where he receives full ride on a football scholarship; there, his violence towards Annie escalates until a vicious attack convinces her to seek help. But even with a counselor-and a restraining order-Kevin continues to terrorize her until she gets help from outside the law. Clarke, a domestic violence expert, does an excellent job laying out the issues that a young person might face in an abusive relationship and when trying to get out (the author describes the abuse graphically, and in one troubling scene, a police officer called to her house tells her that if she signs a complaint, Kevin "would have a permanent arrest record and all because his wife was flirting at a party"). An appendix covers topics such as the characteristics of an abuser and how to create a safety plan. Unfortunately, much of the narrative emphasizes telling over showing ("It had been so long since there was someone who seemed to really care about her"), and characters with names like Maureen and Marty give the book a dated feel. All in all, the novel comes across as a pointed cautionary tale, and readers may be disappointed that Annie must depend on an outsider-not herself or the system-to ultimately solve her problems. Ages 12-up. (Jan.) Copyright 2004 Reed Business Information.
Editorials
Publishers Weekly
In newcomer Clarke's instructional problem novel about an abusive relationship, Annie gets pregnant by her possessive high school sweetheart, gives birth to their daughter, then marries him. She moves with Kevin from Chicago to Texas, where he receives full ride on a football scholarship; there, his violence towards Annie escalates until a vicious attack convinces her to seek help. But even with a counselor-and a restraining order-Kevin continues to terrorize her until she gets help from outside the law. Clarke, a domestic violence expert, does an excellent job laying out the issues that a young person might face in an abusive relationship and when trying to get out (the author describes the abuse graphically, and in one troubling scene, a police officer called to her house tells her that if she signs a complaint, Kevin "would have a permanent arrest record and all because his wife was flirting at a party"). An appendix covers topics such as the characteristics of an abuser and how to create a safety plan. Unfortunately, much of the narrative emphasizes telling over showing ("It had been so long since there was someone who seemed to really care about her"), and characters with names like Maureen and Marty give the book a dated feel. All in all, the novel comes across as a pointed cautionary tale, and readers may be disappointed that Annie must depend on an outsider-not herself or the system-to ultimately solve her problems. Ages 12-up. (Jan.) Copyright 2004 Reed Business Information.KLIATT
The clear intent of this novel, elaborated through an appendix of factual information and advice, is to demonstrate how insidious domestic violence can be and to offer a model for escaping it. Sadly, the lethal combination of great length, wooden dialog, cardboard characters, and peculiar lapses of credible background material militates against the book finding the readers who need or want it. Annie first meets her husband-to-be when they are in middle school. When she becomes pregnant the summer before their senior year in high school, they decide to marry. The young family moves from Chicago to Texas, where Kevin has a basketball scholarship that includes married-student housing. Kevin's emotional and then physical abuse of Annie escalates from apparently innocent moodiness in their early relationship through a full-on assault requiring hospitalization by Christmas of their first year in Texas. It's difficult to pinpoint the time period of the setting: the teens have ready, and apparently legal, access to alcohol; Annie—clearly a caring and loving mother—smokes; they listen to records, rather than a newer recorded music format. More difficult are the theological and biological gaffes: in spite of being a good Catholic, Annie associates the Immaculate Conception with Jesus' physical birth, rather than with the state of Mary's lack of original sin; Annie and Kevin's baby is walking and eating solid foods by the time she's six months old without these feats seeming remarkable to any onlooker. Annie's emotions are, indeed, very realistic, both in their development and expression. The cavalier manner in which her friends suggest and Annie decides to use a gun may be realistic, buta little heart-stopping if Annie is meant to be a model for learning to deal with her problems appropriately. If only the prose flowed smoothly, all these problems would not detract from the impact the story could have. However, with this added rhetorical issue, it's hard to believe readers will get through its 400-plus pages to see how it's possible to get past a potentially deadly situation. KLIATT Codes: SA—Recommended for senior high school students, advanced students, and adults. 2004, HarperCollins, Avon, 471p., Ages 15 to adult.—Francisca Goldsmith
VOYA
Annie and Kevin, high school sweethearts, get pregnant after their "first time." Kevin violently reminds Annie of an innocent situation he misunderstood, and questions whether or not the child is his. With welts on her neck reminding her of his anger, Annie ceases contact with Kevin for one month, after which he proposes and she accepts. An athlete, Kevin is awarded a scholarship to play football in Texas. Annie, Kevin, and baby Mary move from Chicago to live in married student housing. Annie and her daughter are isolated on campus, where Kevin is studying or practicing most of the time. He soon comes to control every aspect of their lives, including the key to the mailbox, cutting Annie off from contact with her family. After other violent outbreaks, Annie threatens to leave, but before she can, one final attack nearly ends her life. An abuse victim, educator, and advocate, Clarke illustrates realistic situations, but her writing is unpolished and amateur. Rather than showing, she tells. Narration is heavy and dialogue banal. A new support system for Annie is conveniently in place when she needs it. But unlike the movies in which the victim resorts to murder because no one listens to her pleas, Clarke provides outlets of support to show readers where they might look for help themselves. Better writing and plot connections would have made this story emotional, but the horror and fear of abuse is ever present, and young female readers will absorb it with trepidation and hope. VOYA Codes 2Q 4P S (Better editing or work by the author might have warranted a 3Q; Broad general YA appeal; Senior High, defined as grades 10 to 12). 2004, HarperCollins, 480p., pb. Ages 15 to 18.—JessicaMize