Publishers Weekly
Take a vaudeville stage with some flimsy painted scenery, two clay figures that represent Barnett and Rex (Billy Twitters and His Blue Whale Problem), a brash and bespectacled heroine named Chloe (hand-drawn), a lion (also drawn), and some walk-on characters, and you’ve got a comedy sketch in picture-book form about the chaos involved in collaborative storytelling. The action plays out in photos of a small, makeshift stage on which Chloe gets lost in the forest and meets—a lion? Or should it be a dragon? “Mac” and “Adam” disagree vehemently about which would be cooler, and Adam ends up being eaten by the lion. Chloe tries to enlist the help of passersby to save him (“I only go after wolves dressed as old ladies,” says a strapping man felling trees) and eventually comes up with a solution of her own, one that allows for even more meta-comedy. As befits its work-in-progress nature, the story gets a little lost in the middle, but rat-a-tat dialogue and fresh visuals should keep it at the top of the bedtime pile. Ages 4–8. Agent: Steven Malk, Writers House. (Apr.)
Children's Literature
- Suzanna E. Henshon
Have you ever read a children's book that is truly interactive? Young readers will dive into this story, which features Mac (a writer), Adam (an illustrator), and Chloe (the main character). In this postmodern text, readers will see the author and illustrator argue about the book creation process. Meanwhile, Chloe heads off to the merry-go-round to take a ride with the coins she has found. Chloe is walking back through the forest when she meets up with a lion (who looks like a dragon). Soon Mac and Adam disagree about whether to include a lion or dragon, while an amused Chloe waits patiently for her story to continue. A lion appears, swallows Adam whole, and the story continues as planned. Soon Mac is disappointed with the replacement artist whose lion just is not scary enough. Will the entire book be a disaster? Chloe begs Mac to continue with the story, but Mac has lost hope. Finally Adam is rescued from the lion, and begins drawing again. Young readers will enjoy this humorous adventure, and the interactive characters who step off the page and become real through their playful antics. Reviewer: Suzanna E. Henshon, Ph.D.
School Library Journal
K-Gr 3—After Barnett and Rex introduce themselves, readers meet Chloe, the main character. The story progresses smoothly until Mac writes that a huge lion leapt out at Chloe, and Adam draws a dragon instead (he "just thought a dragon would be cooler"). A fight erupts over artistic vision, with the author firing the illustrator and having the lion swallow him whole. He then introduces a new artist who can "illustrate a brilliant story written by a true genius." The new illustrator does not work out as hoped, though, and nor do Mac's attempts to illustrate the book himself. Finally Chloe takes command and sets off on a fairy-tale-inspired quest to save the story and Adam. The illustrations are pitch-perfect: claymation for the author and illustrators and cartoon for the story characters, who act out their parts on a proscenium stage. The result is an elaborate prank on the picture-book genre, and it comes together in playful harmony. Chloe is an engaging youngster, sporting blue braids, owlish glasses, and a pith helmet. Children old enough to understand the constructs of a book will delight in the comedic deconstruction, and adults will enjoy the references to traditional tales, from King Arthur to Frankenstein.—Suzanne Myers Harold, Multnomah County Library System, Portland, OR
Kirkus Reviews
This meta-picture book offers plenty of sly giggles (and knows it). On first read, the droll surprises in Barnett and Rex's project are endearing. "This is me, Mac. I'm the author of this book," explains a waving man, who next introduces "Adam…. the illustrator" and "Chloe…. the main character." Conservatively dressed Mac (collared shirt and tie under sweater) and hipster Adam (thick-rimmed glasses, big-cuffed, darkwash jeans) resemble stringless Plasticine marionettes. Chloe is more cartoony, with wide-leg pants, indigo pigtails and huge purple eyes under enormous glasses. Initially, Chloe's plot is mild--a walk, a merry-go-round. But Adam draws a dragon where Mac's text specifies a lion, and, after a power struggle, Mac fires Adam. Mac hires a substitute, then makes the (badly-drawn-because-not-drawn-by-Adam) lion swallow Adam. Without Adam, things go badly. Mac needs Chloe's help. As cool as Chloe is, her arc's mostly a vehicle for the Mac/Adam conflict and for excellent inter-media interactions such as a flatly drawn lion swallowing a 3-D–looking figure. Nobody explains why Chloe's plot occurs on a theater stage, nor how new characters appear during a phase when--supposedly--nobody's illustrating. One terrific scene echoes the old Looney Tunes cartoon about a cartoonist briskly altering Daffy Duck's costumes and scenery, to Daffy's great consternation. Clever and funny, though it's possible that only a niche audience will want repeat readings. (Picture book. 4-8)