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Rhyming Season

by Edward Averett
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Overview

Seventeen-year-old Brenda Jacobsen comes from a family of tall people. In the small logging town of Hemlock, Washington, being tall makes you better at trimming the high spots on trees or at playing basketball. Brenda’s life has always revolved around basketball, particularly the career of her older brother, Benny, the town’s rising star. But Benny died in a car accident last year, leaving Brenda and her parents without the star of their family and without a way to fill the huge hole in their lives.

Though Hemlock’s dreams of basketball glory died along with her brother, Brenda is looking forward to playing on the lessimportant girls’ team. This year the girls planned to get the recognition they deserve—but that was before their coach left to take a better job. Now they’re faced with a new coach, whose offbeat philosophy has the girls reciting lines from poems as they play. It brings them recognition, but not the kind they were hoping for. Still, when the sawmill closes down and Brenda’s parents seem to be on the verge of breaking up, she and the rest of the team find inspiration in the last place they’d ever have expected—poetry.

Synopsis

Seventeen-year-old Brenda Jacobsen comes from a family of tall people. In the small logging town of Hemlock, Washington, being tall makes you better at trimming the high spots on trees or at playing basketball. Brenda’s life has always revolved around basketball, particularly the career of her older brother, Benny, the town’s rising star. But Benny died in a car accident last year, leaving Brenda and her parents without the star of their family and without a way to fill the huge hole in their lives.

Though Hemlock’s dreams of basketball glory died along with her brother, Brenda is looking forward to playing on the lessimportant girls’ team. This year the girls planned to get the recognition they deserve—but that was before their coach left to take a better job. Now they’re faced with a new coach, whose offbeat philosophy has the girls reciting lines from poems as they play. It brings them recognition, but not the kind they were hoping for. Still, when the sawmill closes down and Brenda’s parents seem to be on the verge of breaking up, she and the rest of the team find inspiration in the last place they’d ever have expected—poetry.

Lauri Berkenkamp - Children's Literature

Brenda Jacobsen is a high school senior struggling with many things: the loss of her older brother, Benny, star of their small-town basketball team and the glue that held her family together; the loss of her father's job as the town's mill shuts down; the disintegration of her parents' marriage; the attraction she feels to the one boy in town her parents would really hate; and her own decisions about her future. Brenda's main solace is basketball. She and her teammates make a pact to bring home the state championship trophy to bring some life back to their dying town, and to prove that girls can play and compete as well as boys. When Brenda's basketball coach takes another job and the team is left with their eccentric English teacher as head coach, their dreams of a successful season seem doomed. Coach Hobbs assigns each girl on the team a new name, the name of a famous poet--Brenda's is Emily Dickinson--and instructs the girls to recite poetry aloud as they play. The girls balk at this at first, but as they learn more about their poets and poetry, they become more successful on the court and learn things about themselves off court, too. While this book has good intentions, it falls flat. There are too many plot lines going on at once for any of them to be fully developed. The result is a superficial glossing over of at least a dozen different topics. The core plot is about Brenda and her relationship with her family and how she copes with the loss of her brother. It is also about her town, the team, her sense of self, her relationship with her parents, her budding romance with her first boyfriend, her father's relationship with her mother, her father's sense of self-loathing, hermother's sense of a life not fully lived, and more. Any of these would have been plenty to address in the book as a single topic, but the author tries to pack all of them into the book and ultimately leaves the reader not caring especially much about any of them. 2205, Clarion Books, Ages 12 up.

About the Author, Edward Averett

Edward Averett divides his time between Seattle and Spokane, Washington. This is his first novel for young adults.

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Children's Literature

Brenda Jacobsen is a high school senior struggling with many things: the loss of her older brother, Benny, star of their small-town basketball team and the glue that held her family together; the loss of her father's job as the town's mill shuts down; the disintegration of her parents' marriage; the attraction she feels to the one boy in town her parents would really hate; and her own decisions about her future. Brenda's main solace is basketball. She and her teammates make a pact to bring home the state championship trophy to bring some life back to their dying town, and to prove that girls can play and compete as well as boys. When Brenda's basketball coach takes another job and the team is left with their eccentric English teacher as head coach, their dreams of a successful season seem doomed. Coach Hobbs assigns each girl on the team a new name, the name of a famous poet--Brenda's is Emily Dickinson--and instructs the girls to recite poetry aloud as they play. The girls balk at this at first, but as they learn more about their poets and poetry, they become more successful on the court and learn things about themselves off court, too. While this book has good intentions, it falls flat. There are too many plot lines going on at once for any of them to be fully developed. The result is a superficial glossing over of at least a dozen different topics. The core plot is about Brenda and her relationship with her family and how she copes with the loss of her brother. It is also about her town, the team, her sense of self, her relationship with her parents, her budding romance with her first boyfriend, her father's relationship with her mother, her father's sense of self-loathing, hermother's sense of a life not fully lived, and more. Any of these would have been plenty to address in the book as a single topic, but the author tries to pack all of them into the book and ultimately leaves the reader not caring especially much about any of them. 2205, Clarion Books, Ages 12 up.
—Lauri Berkenkamp

School Library Journal

Gr 7-9-Some basketball players might have a "lucky" number on their jersey or even wear shoes that are bound to bring them good fortune-but recite poetry at the foul line? That's just what Mr. Hobbs, the new girls' basketball coach/high school English teacher, has his team do to encourage focus and concentration. Does it work? Eventually. Brenda, one of the star players, is mostly the sap that holds the team together even though she is dealing with the death of her older brother, Benny, eight months earlier; her parents' separation; and living in a small town in Washington that doesn't hold much promise. When the Fostoria Mill closes, change is the only thing that is certain. To start with, Mr. Hobbs gives all the basketball players names of famous poets. Brenda's is Emily Dickinson, whose work she learns to embrace on and off the court. However, she does not embrace life as a recluse and in shadow, but decides to come off the sidelines and present herself to the world. In Hemlock, this mostly means going to college and leaving the small-town squabbles behind. This book will attract readers who are on the brink of transformation in their own lives. They will identify with Brenda's determination and self-discovery while she encounters difficult circumstances. Young adults will also appreciate that sometimes a little poetry helps, too.-Kelly Czarnecki, Bloomington Public Library, IL Copyright 2005 Reed Business Information.

Kirkus Reviews

Squeaky clean, and devoid of any aspect of contemporary teen culture (no Internet, drugs or sex; rap is called "urban music"), this first-person narrative, set in a logging community, tells the story of a high-school senior who must learn to cope with a pile of grown-up issues: the recent loss of her basketball star brother, the shuttering of the town's mill and a peculiar basketball coach who believes in the power of poetry. Hanging tough, Brenda negotiates these issues by excelling in basketball and helping bring her team to the State Championship. At the same time, she must referee between her player pals, the antagonistic bunch of unemployed men and the eccentric coach who implements the practice of identifying each girl as a particular dead poet in the hope that poetry will help them develop insight into themselves and find the rhythm of basketball. Brenda's storytelling is superficial, her voice without personality and too often-particularly in her interactions with her father-rings emotionally false. Too many problems try to ratchet up the emotional temperature, and readers never get far enough in Brenda's head to heat up a connection. (Fiction. 12+)

Book Details

Published
September 1, 2005
Publisher
Houghton Mifflin Harcourt
Pages
224
Format
Hardcover
ISBN
9780618469482

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