Publishers Weekly
Fans of If You Give a Mouse a Cookie and its sequels should enjoy how debut author Moore, channeling an imaginative boy at the beach with his family, muses upon the consequences of having a bright red dragon take up lodging in his sand castle. At first it's all fun and games ("...you'll have a built-in marshmallow toaster"), with a little subterfuge thrown in (since there's no smoking on the beach, "you'll have to hide his smoke from the lifeguard"). But as the day wears on, the fantasy begins to impinge on others. Ultimately, the cardinal sin of the beach is committed: throwing sand at one's annoying big sister. "Then you'll march over to your sandcastle and order your dragon to leave until he learns some manners," says the narrator, who seems firm in his resolution, but who will live to pretend another day. Although it's not the freshest concept on the shelves, Moore has a light, sure touch, and she gives McWilliam (I Need My Monster) plenty of room to exercise his considerable gifts for operatic expressiveness and expertly choreographed physical humor. Ages 4–8. (May)
Children's Literature - Ken Marantz and Sylvia Marantz
"If you build a perfect sandcastle, a dragon will move in." So begins the narrative of a castle builder on the beach, and so it happens, at least in his imagination. He notes all the advantages of having a dragon, like a built-in marshmallow toaster and a protector from bullies. When he tries to tell his mother, father, and sister about it, however, they don't believe him. Then the dragon starts causing trouble, like eating all the sandwiches, making bubbles in the lemonade, and nibbling the brownies. His parents blame him and draw the line. He decides to make the dragon leave, vowing never to make a perfect sand castle again, "At least until tomorrow." The delightfully humorous fantasy introduces the enthusiastic sand architect and the happy, fire-belching dragon on the jacket. McWilliam uses a pencil to create the lively duo and the supporting cast and props; color is supplied by digital acrylic. The cartoon-y scenes contrast the usual activities of the family with the imaginary but plausible behavior of the playful dragon. The beginning end pages show the happy family arriving at the beach. On the final end pages, a host of eager youngsters are constructing sand castles on the beach, each with a resident dragon. Reviewer: Ken Marantz and Sylvia Marantz
School Library Journal
PreS-Gr 2—While enjoying a day at the beach with his family, a boy builds a perfect sand castle and a dragon promptly moves in toting a well-worn suitcase. The youngster can't believe his luck while the rest of the family can't believe him. Mischief blamed on the dragon eventually gets the child in trouble, but that doesn't stop him from building an even better castle the next day. While the text is fun, the story is truly told through the comical illustrations. The friendly red dragon's expressions are hilarious whether he is joyfully flying a kite, gobbling sandwiches, or has his snout wrapped in a towel to smother his smoke. Readers will enjoy pointing out what could be real-life explanations for everything the boy attributes to it. Certainly "no beach bully would dare stomp your castle with a dragon inside." (But it would run from an angry dad, pictured behind the narrator.) From the delighted face of the boy when he finds the dragon, to the frustration of the parents when the creature has caused too much trouble, the story and pictures show a classic family outing. This story of a runaway imagination will make for an entertaining storytime as well as an enjoyable one-on-one read.—Laura Stanfield, Campbell County Public Library, Ft. Thomas, KY
Kirkus Reviews
Doesn't every child want a dragon?Well, "[i]f you build the perfect sandcastle, a dragon will move in," and in this funny andcreative riff on cause and effect, that's exactly what happens. At first, things are perfect: You have a friend to play with, a permanent bully deterrent, a built-in marshmallow toaster and an ever-present raft. But then things start to get complicated. You have to feed the dragon and clean up after him—and no one will believe you when you explain that the dragon is the one to blame.Was thata dragon-ish cackle coming from inside the sandcastle? Be careful what you wish for! Colorful, cartoony illustrationsbrim with humor as they depict this animated boy andtheimpish dragon who may or may not entirely exist. The deadpan text is sure to illicit giggles as itcaptures the conundrum of an imaginary friend with a child's eye and provides a gentleacceptance of the mild misbehavior that sometimes accompanies imaginative play. Oh, well. Maybe it's time to get rid of the dragon, as long as you are polite about it. But if you build another perfect sandcastle, perhaps he'll come back (with friends)tomorrow. A sandy complement toIf You Give a Mouse a Cookie. (Picture book. 4-8)