Chicago Tribune
Compelling, appealing, distinctive.
People Magazine
Poignantly told...Anyone who has ever fallen for an unsuitable love will respond to Mitchard's tale of the yearning that transcends reason.
Publishers Weekly
- Publisher's Weekly
Despite portentous foreshadowing, Mitchard second novel never achieves the dramatic momentum and the emotional immediacy of her acclaimed fiction debut,
The Deep End of the Ocean. But her depiction of two female protagonists is so large-hearted and wise that readers undoubtedly will be engrossed in their story. At 14, Arlington "Arley" Mowbray is a sensitive, conscientious and atypical teenager in a small, tacky South Texas town. She writes poetry, for one thing, and, instead of dating boys, she is a virtual slave to her hard-as-nails mother, whose lack of maternal instincts is shocking. When love-starved Arley begins corresponding with 23-year-old Dillon Thomas LeGrande, in jail for armed robbery, she is seduced by the poetry he writes and, with the reluctant help of public defender Annie Singer, gains permission to marry him. Soon, protective Annie takes a pregnant Arley into her home and heart, complicating her own relationship with her fiance a death-row lawyer. Eventually, Dillon's true nature as a psychopath erupts, putting Arley and others in mortal danger.
Mitchard's facility with intertwining plot lines results in a surprise-packed conclusion (with perhaps one surprise too many). Her depiction of the dizzy rapture of first love, and her insights into the maternal bond (Arley's with her infant daughter; Annie's with Arley, her surrogate daughter) are deeply affecting. Yet readers will find a troubling credibility problem. That studious Arley can transcend her culturally bereft upbringing is at least plausible, but it is unlikely that bad-boy Dillon would have the sensibility, background or vocabulary to create the poems attributed to him (actually written by Mitchard's friend, poet Sharron Singleton). Since so much of the plot hinges on Dillon's gift for poetry, the reader is keenly aware of this major flaw.
Library Journal
It's clear from the start that bad things will happen in this book. And it's just as clear that Mitchard (The Deep End of the Ocean) is no one-book wonder. In alternating first-person chapters, 14-year-old Arlington (Arley) Mowbray and almost-40 attorney Anne Singer tell their stories. Arley, the youngest of her unmarried mother's three children, virtually raised herself, and her lack of love at home makes her susceptible to attention from prisoner Dillon LeGrande, whom she weds after three months of correspondence. Denied a conjugal visit with Dillon, Arley seeks out Annie, who feels an instant attachment to her young client; Annie hears her biological clock ticking, but her longtime companion, Stuart, doesn't want a child. So Annie turns surrogate mother, assisting Arley with the conjugal visit and through her ensuing pregnancy and childbirth, as Annie's life takes major turns and danger long hinted at is realized. Mitchard has created unforgettable characters in evocative Texas settings in this assured, accomplished, and achingly lovely novel -- Michele Leber, Fairfax County Public Library, Arlington, Virginia
Library Journal
It's clear from the start that bad things will happen in this book. And it's just as clear that Mitchard (The Deep End of the Ocean) is no one-book wonder. In alternating first-person chapters, 14-year-old Arlington (Arley) Mowbray and almost-40 attorney Anne Singer tell their stories. Arley, the youngest of her unmarried mother's three children, virtually raised herself, and her lack of love at home makes her susceptible to attention from prisoner Dillon LeGrande, whom she weds after three months of correspondence. Denied a conjugal visit with Dillon, Arley seeks out Annie, who feels an instant attachment to her young client; Annie hears her biological clock ticking, but her longtime companion, Stuart, doesn't want a child. So Annie turns surrogate mother, assisting Arley with the conjugal visit and through her ensuing pregnancy and childbirth, as Annie's life takes major turns and danger long hinted at is realized. Mitchard has created unforgettable characters in evocative Texas settings in this assured, accomplished, and achingly lovely novel -- Michele Leber, Fairfax County Public Library, Arlington, Virginia
School Library Journal
YA--Teen readers will connect with Arley Mowbray's thought processes if not with her unusual situation. Against the advice of others and her own common sense, the 14-year-old falls in love with, marries, and bears the child of Dillon, who resides in prison until he escapes. Their attraction grew through writing letters, and Arley knew little of the man Dillon had become. She is determined to raise her child under better conditions than she experienced, and is helped on many levels by her friend Annie Singer. The various types and dimensions of motherhood subtly come through in the well-designed characterizations. The writing is skilled enough to make readers care about the direction Arley's life takes, and the plot twists and vivid characters are sure to appeal to many YAs.--Catherine Charvat, Kings Park Library, Burke, VA
Kirkus Reviews
Part thriller and part romance, this quick-read melodrama by Mitchard (the Oprah-anointed The Deep End of the Ocean, 1996) tries to keep quite a few narrative balls in the air, juggling jailhouse love, teen pregnancy, escaped convicts, death row lawyers, biological clocks, and the whole capricious character of the lone star state of Texas. When Arlington Mowbray starts writing to Dillon LeGrande at his current place of residence, the Solamente River Correctional Facility, she doesn't expect much more than to fulfill a dare. At 14, what Arley, an honor student and track star, doesn't know about men could fill a book. And when Dillon's letters begin to arrive, full of poetry and cowboy cordiality, Arley starts to fall in love. She visits him, and the two decide to marry secretly. Which is where Annie Singer, lawyer for a women's defense organization, comes in, helping Arley arrange for her first conjugal visit with her now husband. After a tender and wild night in a trailer by the prison, Arley discovers that she's pregnant, is kicked out by her mother, and moves in with Annie and her longtime boyfriend Stuart. Arley's pregnancy only serves to emphasize the stalemate of Annie's relationship to Stuart, a death row attorney whose crusades for his clients always take precedence over a private life. When Dillon escapes from jail, Arley is placed in hiding in an isolated cabin, learning only from news broadcasts about the antics of the "Highwayman," the romantic persona Dillon has created (based on their favorite poem) for himself as he politely plunders the state. Arley waits for him to come and carry her away. Meanwhile, she's threatened by a forest fire and by the arrival of variousviolent family members—a crazy sister among them—and is surprised overall by a few too many revelations. A big, readable novel, but also one neither surprising nor penetrating enough to be especially memorable.